Here’s my comment:
http://nilyave.wordpress.com/2008/05/25/020-design-4-%e5%af%bb%c2%b7%e5%bc%82%e6%a2%a6-programme-booklet/
Hi Zhengyan! I love the design of the cover because it’s really unique and captures the balloons, flowers and super-exaggerated hair really well. The colours also exude this dreamy feel and I feel that the use of black and white with a tinge of indigo really worked! The drawing of the girl is really great 
However, I think there is room for improvement in the text. I guess the title 寻异梦 can be better executed. Perhaps the hair that is blowing in the wind can extend and “wrap around” the text? Overall, this is really well done
~ by cxetheresa on August 25, 2008.
Posted in Comments and Criticisms
Comments & Criticisms III — Zhengyan’s programme booklet design
Here’s my comment:
http://nilyave.wordpress.com/2008/05/25/020-design-4-%e5%af%bb%c2%b7%e5%bc%82%e6%a2%a6-programme-booklet/
Hi Zhengyan! I love the design of the cover because it’s really unique and captures the balloons, flowers and super-exaggerated hair really well. The colours also exude this dreamy feel and I feel that the use of black and white with a tinge of indigo really worked! The drawing of the girl is really great
However, I think there is room for improvement in the text. I guess the title 寻异梦 can be better executed. Perhaps the hair that is blowing in the wind can extend and “wrap around” the text? Overall, this is really well done 
~ by cxetheresa on August 25, 2008.
Posted in Comments and Criticisms